Attached are images of my four line compositions for this project. First is the horizontal/vertical submission, second is the all diagonal lines submission, third is all curved lines, and last is the combination of all four line types.

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Love the diagonal and combo designs! (I’m not sure why the diagonal thumbnail is in a different orientation than the enlarged view so maybe you can see if you can fix that.)
I like the central element in the curve design but the other elements crowd it a bit. The h/v piece loses some of the intriguing scale narrative you had in the studio version. I think even rotating it 90 degrees counter-clockwise might give a better spatial and architectural read.
If you have time to tweak these prior to crit feel free, but overall a great job!
Hi Teasha! I definitely agree with Jason here, you did a really great job overall. I love how in your diagonal design you leave a lot of white space in the middle. It’s easy on the eye and I wonder how it would look if you flipped the paper to be portrait instead of landscape. I also really like the tiniest rectangle in your horizontal/vertical piece and how it seems like an outlier compared to the rest of the blocks. I think that one has a nice narrative to it.