i am working remotely, and these are my line projects that I have so far. these are not completely done yet and would like feedback, thanks!
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i am working remotely, and these are my line projects that I have so far. these are not completely done yet and would like feedback, thanks!
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Hi Evelyn! I can imagine how difficult it must be working remotely during this project, so props to you for pulling through and making some cool designs. Right now I am liking your diagonal design best. I enjoy how the figure is anchored at the bottom of the page and the lines of the traingle look like they’re passing in front and behind of each other. I think you could even try adding another few pieces to the right side, maybe the top to add some more interest into the work. For your vertical/horizontal, I could encourage you to play with the idea of adding a few more horizontal lines in there. For the curved, I like how the lines remind me of waves, and I’d like to see how it would look if you flipped the paper to a horizontal orientation. Overall, I think you’re putting in great effort, my only other piece of advice is to work on craftsmanship by cutting cleaner lines and cleaning up glue marks on the page.