I like the variation of solutions you came up with. They’re all very creative. All of these solutions make me uncomfortable some how. The tiny little piece below a massive slanted rectangle – it’s intimidating. The curved solution, all sides touch the edge except (the mouth?) – crescent shape on the left. The eye in middle is not centered on the page and not entirely centered in the form. The small slices at the top of the 2nd pillars in your 3rd solution – why is that language not present in the rest of your solution? Combined – I wish these lines were perfectly straight and I think this concept would be better conveyed.
I like the variation of solutions you came up with. They’re all very creative. All of these solutions make me uncomfortable some how. The tiny little piece below a massive slanted rectangle – it’s intimidating. The curved solution, all sides touch the edge except (the mouth?) – crescent shape on the left. The eye in middle is not centered on the page and not entirely centered in the form. The small slices at the top of the 2nd pillars in your 3rd solution – why is that language not present in the rest of your solution? Combined – I wish these lines were perfectly straight and I think this concept would be better conveyed.