Hi Devin! I like that all of your designs are complex, but are not too overcrowded or busy. The one that stands out to me most is the one with the sphere. You did a good job making it look 3 dimensional and I like the composition of the whole page. I think it could even look good as landscape instead of portrait.
Devin – Love the conceptual thinking in these and the automotive inspirations. As mentioned in crit, I think the combo is most dynamic overall in its graphic presence, narrative and activation of the space. A nice first series!
Hi Devin! I like that all of your designs are complex, but are not too overcrowded or busy. The one that stands out to me most is the one with the sphere. You did a good job making it look 3 dimensional and I like the composition of the whole page. I think it could even look good as landscape instead of portrait.
Devin – Love the conceptual thinking in these and the automotive inspirations. As mentioned in crit, I think the combo is most dynamic overall in its graphic presence, narrative and activation of the space. A nice first series!