Love #1 & #4.
#3 is an intriguing concept, but falls short compositionally.
And I kind of see the activation of two squares in #2! I think this would have worked better for the assignment if you strung all four across a horizontal format in one or two bands that could feel more rectangular than square. Still very cool and great shape work.
These are so cool!!!
I’m glad you changed the first composition to your original pattern – love the dots. The craftsmanship on #2 is stellar! I feel it would be more successful horizontal and centered. Composition IV is great, love the white on black – is the face your original work or traced? I like the curl at the end of the lips. For composition III, I like the shapes – I would rework the shapes spacing in relation to the edge of the page and each other.
Overall, super creative!
Love #1 & #4.
#3 is an intriguing concept, but falls short compositionally.
And I kind of see the activation of two squares in #2! I think this would have worked better for the assignment if you strung all four across a horizontal format in one or two bands that could feel more rectangular than square. Still very cool and great shape work.
These are so cool!!!
I’m glad you changed the first composition to your original pattern – love the dots. The craftsmanship on #2 is stellar! I feel it would be more successful horizontal and centered. Composition IV is great, love the white on black – is the face your original work or traced? I like the curl at the end of the lips. For composition III, I like the shapes – I would rework the shapes spacing in relation to the edge of the page and each other.
Overall, super creative!